this isn't really the best rendition there is... i'm sorry but there are too
many jagz in the background and grey isn't exacly the scan's aura, its almost
absurd.
Quote by Milkiyo There is uneven browns
on the trees, some lighter shades are not painted properly and there is a great
separation between the different shades. The scan quality doesn't suit the bg
too by one look at it and the leaves falling over it is 2d which doesn't suit
the bg which is more 3d. Perhaps you can paint the scan as well too. As for some
grass in front of her, they look fake. They're a different green from the rest
of the grass. The butterflies are a nice touch
though.
please, don't join the bandwagon. i already made the tree trunks the way i
wanted them to be, the color and everything else. what i need advice on would
probably be the scan but someone already mentioned that.
don't repeat the same critique twice. its just weird to do that.
Quote by BlueAngel17 as what I expect
from a Filipino, haha. ^^ this is now different from all your designs, a
vertigo. and the text seem to be your trademark. when i looked at this, i didn't
think it was RahXephon, until I saw the current sight of Ayato and Mishima over
there at the lower right; meaning the childhood version is at the opposite. I
personally like those "gingerbread men".
however the petals and the bubbles don't look blended well in the background.
you might want to render them more.
What exactly IS a Filipino "idea" lolz. I'm
just curious lolz.
Anyway, thanks for commenting and everything. oo
and for the fav too! .!.
you should consider submitting this in AnimePaper too as this one is a top-notch
wallie. i love the wallie, and gosh, your background is f*ckin detailed! IT'S
AWESOME for that. I especially loved the fact that a "road" exist in
the picture and not merely smeared it with snow. it would have been left
uninteresting if you made it that way. but this one, is just brilliant!
the colors indeed are very well done, but a little striking for my taste. :?
i wished though that you didn't just do the splotches of blurs because its
somewhat too elementary. I would have suggested that you placed nice puffy
clouds and colored them like how you did with this one. this way, the clouds
give it an extra opmh and the wall stands out better.
Ok, I got your message from my gbook. I'm glad you actually apologized.
I already reported this work and the mods would most likely delete it.
But if you would want to delete it yourself, just check the left hand corner of
the navigation bar and click on "Delete Wallpaper". That should handle
it.
THIS IS MY WALLPAPER! I DEMAND THAT YOU TAKE THIS DOWN IMMEDIATELY!
merged: 10-14-2006 ~ 07:27pm
I AM NOT FLATTERED BY THIS RIPPING.
THE ORIGNAL WORK CAN BE FOUND HERE: COVERGIRL by Koi89
as well as in other accounts I have, such as AnimePaper, etc.
PLEASE, DON'T THINK YOU CAN JUST GET AWAY WITH IT!
I have done my part of reporting you and this wallpaper, and let the authorities
handle it.
the paintjob is amazing and the scan integration is well done, but what keeps
off from faving this wall is the extremeness of the yellowish color and that
saturated feeling, its probably because you tried capturing a painted feel, but
it doesn't work for me. :/
i honestly didn't get what was so special about this wallpaper until i decided
to check it out and full view it, [i'm not really fond of vectors lolz but
anyways], this really looked as though you put a lot of effort into it, and for
that, you get my respect and a dose of praise.
agreed with some previous commenters, the scan is wayyy to off for the
background. there is such a thing as contrasting, while there is another called
contradictory. you decide. :p
i'm not particulary "striked" by this wallpaper though, still good
effort. but i wished it had more depth into it, but the small characters is a
start. i dunno but its not the simplicity that puts me off, i think its more of
the color which makes it a tad bit futuristic, though i wished a more
family-based color as to me, this picture abstractly depicts such values.
i have to agree with the 90 comments before me. this is just awesome, like as
though it was ripped off an art book. amazing, and that's coming from me.
i don't get the title of the work though, since you did not explain in
and i'm not feeling the abstract vibe either.
you can still make this work better you know, like, fix the extractions, and the
color. it killed the page.
its beautiful, even here.
it does if you would believe.
this isn't really the best rendition there is... i'm sorry but there are too many jagz in the background and grey isn't exacly the scan's aura, its almost absurd.
i have always adored this wallpaper, and until now, it strikes a chord in my heart+fav definitely.
thanks for all the comments especially the preceding ones at it really helped.
don't be afraid to comment. i don't bite lolz.
please, don't join the bandwagon. i already made the tree trunks the way i wanted them to be, the color and everything else. what i need advice on would probably be the scan but someone already mentioned that.
don't repeat the same critique twice. its just weird to do that.
woah, some major comments there pplz xDD
yeah, its a mistake. >___> and i can't fix it manually so i'm waiting for a mod to change its category...
anyway, you've been commenting on some of my recent walls. wow and thanks!
What exactly IS a Filipino "idea" lolz.
I'm
just curious lolz.
Anyway, thanks for commenting and everything.
oo
and for the fav too! .!.
my only problem with this wallpaper is that its a little blurred, other than that, its ok i guess..
i already commented on this in AnimePaper.
you should consider submitting this in AnimePaper too as this one is a top-notch wallie. i love the wallie, and gosh, your background is f*ckin detailed! IT'S AWESOME for that. I especially loved the fact that a "road" exist in the picture and not merely smeared it with snow. it would have been left uninteresting if you made it that way. but this one, is just brilliant!
its a pretty decent work, i like the romantic flair it gives.
the colors indeed are very well done, but a little striking for my taste. :?
i wished though that you didn't just do the splotches of blurs because its somewhat too elementary. I would have suggested that you placed nice puffy clouds and colored them like how you did with this one. this way, the clouds give it an extra opmh and the wall stands out better.
Ok, I got your message from my gbook. I'm glad you actually apologized.
I already reported this work and the mods would most likely delete it.
But if you would want to delete it yourself, just check the left hand corner of the navigation bar and click on "Delete Wallpaper". That should handle it.
THIS IS MY WALLPAPER! I DEMAND THAT YOU TAKE THIS DOWN IMMEDIATELY!
merged: 10-14-2006 ~ 07:27pm
I AM NOT FLATTERED BY THIS RIPPING.
THE ORIGNAL WORK CAN BE FOUND HERE: COVERGIRL by Koi89
as well as in other accounts I have, such as AnimePaper, etc.
PLEASE, DON'T THINK YOU CAN JUST GET AWAY WITH IT!
I have done my part of reporting you and this wallpaper, and let the authorities handle it.
the paintjob is amazing and the scan integration is well done, but what keeps off from faving this wall is the extremeness of the yellowish color and that saturated feeling, its probably because you tried capturing a painted feel, but it doesn't work for me. :/
i honestly didn't get what was so special about this wallpaper until i decided to check it out and full view it, [i'm not really fond of vectors lolz but anyways], this really looked as though you put a lot of effort into it, and for that, you get my respect and a dose of praise.
pristine is a word to describe it. awesome jop!
agreed with some previous commenters, the scan is wayyy to off for the background. there is such a thing as contrasting, while there is another called contradictory. you decide. :p
i'm not particulary "striked" by this wallpaper though, still good effort. but i wished it had more depth into it, but the small characters is a start. i dunno but its not the simplicity that puts me off, i think its more of the color which makes it a tad bit futuristic, though i wished a more family-based color as to me, this picture abstractly depicts such values.
i have to agree with the 90 comments before me. this is just awesome, like as though it was ripped off an art book. amazing, and that's coming from me.
indeed, it does catch my eye. beautiful piece, but i'm not faving it :p
pretty cool, although a better lighting would have made this even better. its just too bright and blurry for now.
i don't get the title of the work though, since you did not explain in
and i'm not feeling the abstract vibe either.
you can still make this work better you know, like, fix the extractions, and the color. it killed the page.